this is my collab with Shiro

It's our first IC and we learned a lot of things thanks to it . On the next edition we'll do better

Hello

I'm not really confortable with english for give you a whole comment but i'll try to give you one anyway
So, there's a lack of homogeneity in your video. You had an interesting idea at theend, with Tokyo Ghoul / Fate but your technical skills are not high enough to give an correct result.
For the camera movement, please avoid to rotate your scenes please.
Try to make more simple with less effect. You'll see you wan improve a lot faster
If you want some help you can add me on skype or any member of eria

Wow,thanks for your review and helping.I'll add you on Skype and when I'll edit again something bigger like this ,I'll come and ask for a review .
I'll start using ae,the following year and try to improve my basics. :d
Thanks again and a happy new year ! :V

Anytime (y)